MESSAGE AND COPY
StoryBrand for small businesses: how to apply it to your website
StoryBrand is one of the most useful methods for organising the message on a website, but most of what you find is written for large companies. This guide brings it down to a small service business: what it is, what each element means, where it goes on your website and a complete example so you can see it applied.
What StoryBrand is
StoryBrand is a method created by Donald Miller to organise a company’s message using the structure of stories. Its central idea is simple and powerful: the hero is not you, it is your client. You are the guide who helps them solve their problem.
Most websites do the opposite: they talk about the company, its history and its values, and visitors have to guess what is in it for them. StoryBrand turns that around so anyone understands in a few seconds what you offer and why it matters to them.
This guide is my practical application of the method to small business websites; it is not official StoryBrand material.
The seven elements, explained for your website
Your client is the hero · You are the guide
- 1A characterYour client wants something
- 2Has a problemSomething holds them back
- 3Meets a guideEmpathy and authorityYOU
- 4Who gives a planClear steps
- 5And calls to actionAsk them to act
What is at stake
- 6Avoids failureWhat they lose by not acting
- 7Achieves successProblem solved
- A character who wants something. Your client and what they want to achieve, in their own words: “I want to stop worrying about my taxes”, not “comprehensive advisory services”.
- Has a problem. On three levels: the external one (the paperwork, the breakdown, the lawsuit), the internal one (how it makes them feel: insecure, overwhelmed) and the deeper one (why it is not fair that it happens). People look for solutions to the external problem, but decide based on the internal one.
- Meets a guide. You. A good guide shows two things: empathy (“I understand what you are going through”) and authority (“I know how to fix it”), backed by experience, testimonials or figures.
- Who gives them a plan. Usually three clear steps that take away the fear of starting: “1. Tell me about your case. 2. I propose a solution. 3. We take care of everything.”
- And calls them to action. With a direct call (book an appointment, request a quote) and a softer one for those not ready yet (a guide, a checklist).
- To avoid failure. What can go wrong if they do nothing. In moderation: it is enough to remind them what is at stake, without scaring them.
- And ends in success. What their situation will look like once the problem is solved. Concrete and believable.
Where each element goes on your website
- First block of the homepage: what your client wants and how they get it with you, plus the main button. No “Welcome to…”.
- Problem section: the real situations your client faces, in their words.
- Guide section: one sentence of empathy and your proof of authority: years of experience, cases, testimonials, memberships or certifications.
- The plan: three visible, numbered steps. It is one of the most reassuring sections.
- Calls to action: the same main button repeated at several points, plus a soft alternative for those still researching.
- What is at stake and the result: a short block before the end reminding them what they avoid and what they gain.
Your website does not need to read like a fairy tale: the elements show in the order and the words, not in the form. In my book La página web perfecta (in Spanish) I explain this process step by step, adapted to a small business website.
Explain what you do in one sentence
Before writing your website, it is worth summing up your business in a single sentence you can use on the site, on your LinkedIn profile or when someone asks what you do. A structure that works:
Client’s problem + how you solve it + the result they get.
“Many freelancers lose time and money on their taxes. We handle your accounting and paperwork so you never have to think about the tax office and can focus on your business.”
If your sentence is understood without explanations and the other person could repeat it, you are on the right track. If it needs context, it is still too general or too technical.
A complete example: before and after
A fictional accountancy firm for freelancers and small businesses. This is how its website started:
“Ruiz Advisory: over 20 years providing comprehensive tax, accounting and employment advisory services with the utmost professionalism.”
All true, but it talks about the firm, not the client. Applying the method:
- Headline: “Your taxes and accounts, up to date and with no surprises.”
- Problem: “Deadlines you miss, letters from the tax office you do not understand and the feeling of not knowing whether you are doing it right.”
- Guide: “We have been helping freelancers like you for over 20 years. More than 300 clients trust us every quarter.”
- Plan: “1. A first call to understand your case. 2. We send you a fixed-price proposal. 3. We take care of everything and let you know what matters.”
- Call to action: “Book your call” and, as an alternative, “Download this year’s tax calendar”.
- What is at stake and result: “Avoid surcharges and penalties from oversights, and spend your time on what you do best.”
Fictional example created for this guide.
Mistakes when applying StoryBrand
- Turning the website into a story. The method organises the message; there is no need to talk about heroes or adventures.
- Exaggerating the problem. Fear works badly for professional services, and in sectors such as law or healthcare it also clashes with advertising rules.
- Forgetting the proof. Without real experience, cases or testimonials, the guide role does not hold up.
- Copying formulas word for word. Templates help you start, but your client has to recognise themselves in your words, not a manual’s.
- Applying it only to the homepage. Service pages, emails and proposals should tell the same story.
Quick review of your message
Check whether your website already follows the StoryBrand logic:
- Does the first block say what your client wants, rather than what your company is?
- Do you name the problem in the words your client would use?
- Do you show empathy and also proof that you can solve it?
- Is there a visible three-step plan?
- Is the main button repeated, and does it say what happens when clicked?
- Is it clear what the client gains once the problem is solved?
- Can you explain what you do in a single sentence?
To complete your message with good copy, read the guide to the four pillars of copywriting.
Frequently asked questions about StoryBrand
What is StoryBrand?
It is a method created by Donald Miller to organise a company’s message with the structure of a story: the client is the hero, has a problem, and the company is the guide who gives them a plan to solve it.
Does StoryBrand work for a small business?
Yes, and it often works better than for large companies, because a small business can speak directly to one specific type of client. Apply it to the homepage, the service pages and the sentence that sums up your business.
What are the seven elements of StoryBrand?
A character who wants something, a problem, a guide, a plan, a call to action, what can go wrong if they do not act and the success they reach by solving it.
Do I need the official book to apply it?
It helps you understand the method in depth, but you can start with the seven elements in this guide. In my book La página web perfecta (in Spanish) I explain how to apply it to a small business website.
Want your website to tell your story well?
I design your website and write its copy with the StoryBrand method, starting with a strategic audit of your business and your message. And if you prefer to do it yourself, my book La página web perfecta (in Spanish) explains how, step by step.
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